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Tail Vore Part 1 by Donutwish Tail Vore Part 1 by Donutwish
"It was a memorable night, but the next morning, Dee was very annoyed. Instead of spending some quality time together, her new friend was more interested in playing her infernal portable game. Worse, the sounds from the little device was driving her up the wall. Luckily, it was almost time for breakfast..."

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This is part 1 of a 3 part series.

Part 1: Currently viewing
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]

It only seemed appropriate that since she has a tail, she might as well put it to good use. Dee is still discovering abilities she never knew that she had, since becoming the creature that she is now. I like to think that she's a rather versatile predator.

Also, I decided not to go down the macabre path with this series, as I had originally intended. I had some slightly disturbing imagery I was planning to use, but I decided that it was a bit too much and didn't really add anything to the story. So you squeamish types have nothing to worry about, ok?

I decided to do a 'soft' and 'macabre' version of the ending. See Part 3 for details.

Disclaimer: All characters are fictional and are depicted as over the age of 18 years. Characters are original designs by the artist and any resemblance to persons real or fictional is coincidental and unintended.
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:iconlizren:
Lizren Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...So what you're saying is no one died in the making of this comic?...
PsychoAceSmile "you should answer."
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
If you saw the alternate ending to series on Eka's, you'd have your answer!
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:iconlizren:
Lizren Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No way I going to Eka's.
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Kreuzfeuerkind Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
You should definetely go on with the macabre path of the series.
For me, and I don't consider myself as the only one, it would be an absolute overwhelming pleasure, so please go on.
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Hunter2045 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Nice work.
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VoreLover15 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
nice :D
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WhitexWinterxWolf Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You should do both types XD One for non squeamish and squeamish XD
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TheMainMon Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
For a sec, I thought it was "Tali Vore"
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Zignas Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Very thin tail doing the eating there, it's going to be interesting to see the results ^^
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:icondonutwish:
Donutwish Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
In my universe, predators have to be very flexible...and stretchy!
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Tanosia Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Love Dee! :D
Her new friend deserves whats comming, not taking the opportunity for quality time with Dee... i'd jump at that chance any time.
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:icondonutwish:
Donutwish Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
To be fair, I don't think you'd have to twist Dee's arm to convince her to do something related to vore or eating!
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:icontanosia:
Tanosia Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Hmm... that would be perfect!
If only could meet her!
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:icondonutwish:
Donutwish Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
You're a brave man then! The first meeting could be your last...
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:icontanosia:
Tanosia Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
It'd be one hell of a brilliant meeting though ;)
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Demonizer68 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Can't beleive Dees friend fell for the old shoulder tap trick!
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octaviomarie Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Oh no! How can you do that!? You can't eat someone without letting they save their games first, its unethical =/
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:icondonutwish:
Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
It only reinforces the cruel and harsh nature of Devil Girl :(
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JAM4077 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Demon Cell!!!
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:iconneversurrender21:
neversurrender21 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
what the fu-
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CadenGallic Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Nooooo but i'm so close to beating Ballos! D:
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Bob7177 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
:icondatass: awww yeeeee
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:iconzededd:
zededd Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
aaw, no disturbing bits? not even on your Eka's?

not seen a lot of tail-vore when she's so... slivette :P also, i think her tail starts a little high on her spine :S (just my oppinion though)
looking forward to the future pannels though :)

also, random note... do you have Dee's bio anywhere? i don't know a lot about her other than that she's awesome :P
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I wanted her tail a bit higher up than usual, although I think I drew it a bit higher than it is. I don't like the tail too close to the bum because it gets in the way of the bum, visually and functionally.

I think some people associate tail vore with bum expansion, and I'm not in that camp, so in my design, there's a direct link between the tail and Dee's stomach.

Anyway, yeah no dark bits in this little series, unfortunately. It just didn't seem to fit in, especially with the first episode being a bit light hearted.
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zededd Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh, i agree about the proximity to their arse completley (my character Toxx is a posing nightmare!) but i like to think of it extruding not far from where it would animalistically... i try to keep the spine relativley in place... but that is just around belt-height... or a little lower i find...

actually, i'm not the biggest fan of backside inflation, but i don't mind tail-vore... i preffer it when it's stomach-related myself... i expect this will be one of the better ones :D

mind if i ask what the dark bits would have been? if you think they're a lill heavy for a comment, feel free to note a reply :D
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
I'm not a fan of arse-inflation, either, and this won't be one of those. Another thing about the tail - I am very much not a furry/anthro fan, and the lower the placement of the tail, the closer it gets into that territory. So Dee is more along the lines of Cell from DragonballZ in terms of anatomical structure.

As for the dark bits, my original plan was to show the initial stage of digestion inside the tail but from an external view. So imagine the body tightly bound inside the tail and then breaking down in stages.

In the end I decided it didn't need to be shown and would be more effectively conveyed without it, as the viewer would likely imply what was going on.
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zededd Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
fair enough... odly, i don't mind furries :P i preffer scales to fur though ;)

never saw much dragon ball... well... saw a lot but a little happened in it...

sounds pretty cool. more hard vore for the fans :P
it's safe to say that the viewer can easilly put the images to whatever you imply :P

actually, random thought, any plans on another unbirth like the hitchiker again in the future?
i know it's random to ask at the beginning of another of your works, but that one remains my favorite of your works XD
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
Here is my problem with furries: they're often drawn with an eye towards a Disney or anime style, which invariably ends up looking overly cute. Cute is fine, but when it's placed in a highly sexual context (especially with violence involved), it doesn't work for me. Actually, the same can be said for anime/manga style in general when it's drawn carelessly. Ok, that's my rant for the day!

Re: unbirthing
I think this is a theme I'll visit again in the future. The concept does appeal to me, and it's probably one of my favourite vore types. I think the hitchhiker series was probably my most popular one to date, so I think unbirthing is more popular than I originally thought it might be.
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zededd Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i agree there... but i love details! having a cute, fuzzy anthro where the artist wanted a moving teddy-bear kinda sucks... but you stick that with an artist who wants something that occasionally has to battle their inner instincts? something that is possibly only one meal from feral and knows it?
i write them better than i can ever draw them, but it's lots of fun to have a serpentine character battling the urge to devour some cute little rectptionist because she's scared of him...

oh, unbirhting has as big a following as vore does... but it's an acquired taste to all who behold it... it's so maddeningly varied that when someone like me gets dropped in the middle and tries to adopt it i end up looking like a snake-orgy (the good kind)
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
I find it difficult sometime to include the concept of unbirthing within the umbrella of 'vore', because to be honest, I don't think it belongs there. I still think UB is pretty awesome, though, and it pushes many of my naughty buttons in a good way.

But going back to the furry/anthro thing. Nah, I still can't connect with it. Even when it's drawn-well, I can't relate to it when it comes to vore art. I prefer a large dash of darkness with a splash of the macabre in my vore, and the cutesy style anthros that I see so much of are too jarring to me.

My reaction is kind of like that when I see Pokemon or My Little Pony vore. It's like, "No. No. Some things were designed for children or young people, and it's best that it stay that way."
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TheCountAlucard Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
This looks promising.
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alockwood2 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Trouble.
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CeeNova Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh, this is pretty interesting! I always thought tail vore was cool. And I just loooove the use of expressions here--but your work is always wonderful in that regard.
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I can't say I've always been a fan of tail vore, but the idea kinda just twigged in my head recently, and I thought it'd be sexy to have Dee use her tail more!
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CeeNova Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: I've always had a big thing for tails, but I haven't been a fan of tail vore... This could change my mind though.
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pilliwick Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I was soooooo wondering where you where going with this, love the drawing teasers you always run first lol
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
The teasers are always fun to put together. They're also a good example of 'work-in-progress', since the artwork will often have changed since the teaser.
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Psyman2 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I didn't realize Dee's tail attached so high on her back - most I've seen would have been anatomically an extension of the tail-bone at the base of the spine. Looking forward to seeing what happens next though! :-)
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
It's a bit higher than usual. I didn't want her tail to be attached right at the tail bone because I think it doesn't look as aesthetically pleasing there. Her tail is multi-functional, so having it placed further up gives it a bit more flexibility for movement.
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Psyman2 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Ah, cool - looking forward to the continuation of this series! :-)
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LegionaireB Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dee is such a fun character. I wouldn't mind getting caught up in some of her fun (as long as I come out alive and with most of my personality intact).
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
"coming out alive"... sadly, I think we know why she tends to be a loner or has problems keeping friends, hehe.
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LegionaireB Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
**sigh** I know.
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Radioheadfan123 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
AH cliffhanger! Can't wait for next part
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Episode 2: They play Diablo 3 and then have tea!
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Ryukky Featured By Owner May 19, 2012   General Artist
Ahhhhh~ I love it!

-plays on her PS Vita-
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I used to have the original PSP.
/cry
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Ryukky Featured By Owner May 20, 2012   General Artist
I had the PSP 2000, PSP Go, and now the Vita
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Donutwish Featured By Owner May 20, 2012
Anything before the Vita was horrible. I regret ever buying my first gen PSP. I would get a Vita but my eyes get strained easily looking at small screens.
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Ryukky Featured By Owner May 20, 2012   General Artist
Aww,but I love my last gen PSP's they were cool and fun to play with!
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